Thursday, 12 May 2016

Summer Poem

4 comments:

  1. hi Jessie, I like the way you have used lots of discripted words. Next time I think you could not put as much pictures in.
    ka Pai.

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  2. Hi Jessie I like your background. Next time try putting diffrent words in.

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  3. Hi Jessie i liked the way you used pictures to describe your
    poem. You might want to use a different colour for your words so it is easy to read.

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  4. Hi jessie I like your poem I love your sun cool dude

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.