Monday, 12 March 2018

Descriptive writing about a family member, Secret

Here is my piece that I got to choose the family member of it is descriptive writing and has some similies. I worked hard on this and I hope you enjoy.

1 comment:

  1. Wow Jessie, now that I've read your writing it's just like I went to watch that lesson for Charlotte on Alfie too! I think we should send this link to Charlotte to remind her of fun times on Alfie. And Dad loves it too.


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